Godqueen of the Dark Elves (Omnipotent Multiverse Timeline)(Draft 2.5 Beta Test)
Synopsis
*This is an early draft. Feedback is always welcome*
Odynn is frustrated about the age metric of the other two drafts, and expresses that frustration, knowingly at the cost of her cost of Her life and potentially Her Haven. During a forced visit involving a bit of arguing and character work, the Dark Goddess of Knowledge requests that Her own memories of the High Human the Dark Mother interacted with to be wiped before the Masochist of the Elements wakes up in Her bedchambers in the main library of Her Haven.
To calm Herself down, Odynn reads in Her diary before loosing complete track of time of re-witnessing Her rise to Divinity, which begins with a fifteen-hundred-year-old Dark Elf sparring with her grandmother. The Dark Goddess of Knowledge purposely makes Herself go in blind to wonder two questions: "Will mortal Odynn survive the hurtles surrounding her rise to Divinity or will she come across pain that not even her masochism can't convert into pleasure?" and Her personal question, the second question, "Will this be the successful draft?"
What to expect?:
-All common r-rated aspects in movies, seemlessly blended with the world (violence, sex, drugs, etc.)(We get canonical confirmation that the writer, the High Mortal (me, but there is currently no canonical confirmation that its me) have attempted this before)
-Fourth Wall Breaking
-A complex elemental system
-A polyamorous triad (Odynn X Nira X Pyra)
-Introspection and plot meandering (hopefully the latter of the two is more tame than the draft on Tapas and my first draft)
-Badass fight scenes
-As much pronoun avoidance as possible (especially he and she (I find them cumbersome to use. Especially if there are conversations that include members of multiple genders))
Chapters 13
- 1 Teaser Chapter Part I
- 2 Teaser Chapter Part II
- 3 Teaser Chapter Part III
- 4 Chapter 0 Part 1: S1 Prologue
- 5 Chapter 0 Part 2
- 6 Chapter 0 Part 3
- 7 Chapter 1 Part 1: Gentleness That Belittled Brutality
- 8 Chapter 1 Part 2
- 9 Chapter 1 Part 3
- 10 Chapter 2 Part 1: Annoying Little Brother
- 11 Chapter 2 Part 2
- 12 Chapter 2 Part 3
- 13 Chapter 3 Part 1: Schemes From Two Different Times
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