Aetheria Odyssey : The Fool

A transfer student from Japan, Kinamura Seiji is tired of living like a loop from waking up early morning, going to school, studying, going home, and sleeping like every other normal student in America. Freed from a dark past, he finally found friends and intends to do his best in his school life, when one day after entering his classroom, a magic circle suddenly envelops his entire classroom and with a flash of light he found himself being born as a baby in an unfamiliar environment. Before long, with the succession of familiar events occurring one after another, he found out he was reincarnated in another world. The adventurous spirit kept at the bottom of his heart awoken as he steps in this new world with the burning desire.

But a new world still has similar rules, similar nature that humans harbor, similar hierarchy, yet more opportunity. A world of blades and magic gives more freedom for people to commit acts be it good or cruel. Poor Seiji is the first to become the victim of what this world has to offer....

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I suggest starting at the main chapters.

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This is not really my first time writing but I never had reviews on my abandoned novel a long time ago so I didn't really know where to improve. I consider myself a beginner with A LOT to fix, so I'd really appreciate any reader's opinions. Though writing is simply a hobby for me, I still want to make things enjoyable for both you and me.